For my third peer comment, I decided to check out a peers blog whom I don’t personally know. My last two comments were on my pod members who I was in a co-hort with this past year. Ellas third weekly post “what’s next for Ed-Tech?” was an enjoyable read.

Here’s my comment:

Hi Ella, your post is amazing! I like how you’ve laid out your blog. Starting with a short summary of the article and then adding your own thinking and concerns makes it easy to follow. I also LOVE how you added in a video! This video shows the secret carbon footprint that digital data has. It was a nice break in the text and made reading it feel more interactive and less boaring. I also really appreciate the carbon footprint visual. It was very intresting to look at and was an eye opener for me. I didn’t realize how much CO2 TV sets produce! You make some great points about the need for inovation. I agree that we have to find more sustainable technologies.

To make this blog or future ones even better, I would suggest utilizing headings. Having headers for each section would make this flow nicer and make it easier for readers to understand.

Well done Ella! I hope to read more of your posts in the near future 🙂

~ Mady Chase